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GryffinBride
VIP June 2016

Critique my vows!

GryffinBride, on June 6, 2016 at 7:19 PM

Posted in Planning 31

Let me see what you all think of my vows. I know Celia isn't here to help, so I'm counting on you lovely ladies and gents. Here it is: We meet many people during our lives. We shake their hands, introduce ourselves and move on our merry way. You were the only one that I crashed into, and I am...

Let me see what you all think of my vows. I know Celia isn't here to help, so I'm counting on you lovely ladies and gents. Here it is:

We meet many people during our lives. We shake their hands, introduce ourselves and move on our merry way. You were the only one that I crashed into, and I am forever grateful for that. You found me when I was broken, and helped me to rebuild my forever after. You were there for me when I needed to heal both my body and heart. You stood by me when I was lonely. Now we are here today, and I couldn’t be happier.

FH,

I vow to always be on your side, even through the worst storm. I know that I may not always be the easiest to deal with, but I promise to try each day to do better for you. I vow to always love you, even if it is difficult at times. And I promise to always consider letting you keep whatever animal you found on the street. I love you FH, from the bottom of my heart and I am so blessed to spend the rest of my life with you.

31 Comments

  • Jessica
    Super October 2017
    Jessica ·
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    I'm working on my vows now. I love yours! You gave me stuff to think about!

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  • OurAdventureBegins
    VIP October 2016
    OurAdventureBegins ·
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    I figured something like that was what earned the consideration of all animals brought home haha it gives us a really cool glimpse into who he is- perfect stuff for vows Smiley smile

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  • Amber
    Devoted May 2017
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    The vows are perfect. What a cute story! It's like something from a movie.

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  • N
    Master October 2016
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    Cute story!! I love the personality and I can tell you didnt just copy it of the internet.

    the only think I would consider re-wording is the

    "I know that I may not always be the easiest to deal with, but I promise to try each day to do better for you. "

    I'm not a big fan of the "but". It kind of breaks the flow of the whole thing. I would try reading it out loud and playing with different ways of saying that.

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  • GryffinBride
    VIP June 2016
    GryffinBride ·
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    I could play with that line. Maybe something like teplacing the "but" with "so". Would that flow better?

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  • Erin381
    Master September 2016
    Erin381 ·
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    I love it. This is me.


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  • N
    Master October 2016
    no1 ·
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    I think "so" is way better. I would keep playing with that line.

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  • Ashley
    Super September 2019
    Ashley ·
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    I love you vows and your story

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  • futuremrslavender
    Super June 2016
    futuremrslavender ·
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    I think its beautiful what you wrote but to me their not really wedding vows. Personally I would say that to him during your speech at your reception. I could be wrong but I thought vows are supposed to be promises to one an other?

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  • Mrs. Mac
    Master July 2016
    Mrs. Mac ·
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    I think they're beautiful vows!

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  • Bee
    Master April 2017
    Bee ·
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    I think they're perfect.

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