Ok so I'm trying to make a letter to give to the neighbors about our back yard wedding and we will be hand delivering them to make it more personal. What do you think dose it sound ok?
Dear Neighbor,
We will be having our Wedding Ceremony and Reception on June 9th 2012 on the property of (address).
Ceremony will start at 7:30pm - 8pm, the Reception will be held right after Ceremony around 8pm. and the last song will be around 12:30am.
There will be loud music coming from the property, so for your inconvenience and patience we would like to invite you to join us if you like after 9:30pm.
Your patience that night would be greatly appreciated.
The soon to be Newlyweds,
Mark & LaKiesha
(Revised)
Dear Neighbor,
We will be having our Wedding Ceremony and Reception on June 9th 2012 on the property of 6300 N. Happe Rd.
Ceremony will start at 7:30pm - 8pm, the Reception will be held right after Ceremony around 8pm. and the last song will be around 12:30am.
There will be music playing and a lot of celebrants. I would love to invite you all to come and celebrate with us at 9:30 pm.
For those of you that aren't able to attend, I promise that this marriage wont be as loud as the reception.
Your patience that night would be greatly appreciated.
The soon to be Newlyweds,
Mark & LaKiesha