I am Jewish and my fiance is Hindu. We are incorporating both Jewish and Hindu elements into our wedding ceremony. This includes a ketubah (Jewish marriage contract). I want the language to be mostly secular, but I didn't love most of the texts that I found. I loved portions of some, so I combined and rewrote to come up with our own wording. I would love opinions. Also, I have included a picture of the Ketubah that I am thinking about, but I still need to get FH's opinion. I think it is fitting since we are getting married in the mountains.
On the Second day of the month of August in the year Two Thousand Fifteen in Grand Teton National Park, Wyoming, Jennifer XXXXXXX, daughter of Marc and Cathy XXXXXXX, and Ashwin XXXXX, son of Taraknath and Deena XXXXX, have entered into a mutual covenant of marriage.
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