Personal vows, tell me what you think :)

Awwww--- sooooo sweet. Only suggestion: change "something" in line 3 to "someone". Otherwise, perfect!

I think they are beautiful!

All I would suggest is something to someone, which Barbara mentioned, and "made me realize", not "realized." (I know that's really minor... sorry, I'm an editor, I can't help it!)

Brought tears to my eyes, that's so sweet. I don't know if I could stand up there reading w/o crying!

Barbara and Laura, thanks for the changes, after I looked at it I realized they must have been common typing mistakes lol but thanks for picking them out. I must have gotten carried away my with typing lol. Anonymous, very nice, yes mine are Long, but I didn't want the traditional repeat after me ones lol, I wanted it to be a shortened story of life pre-marriage life together, and mrs. Bricker, I know I hope I don't cry, but we are doing our first look before the ceremony so I hope to get all my jitters out before the ceremony, that way I can compose my self throughout the rest of the ceremony lol