Wedding invitations

Spooky. Forever begins when you.... what? It should be like, "we've decided on forever, and forever begins when we, john and rachel, say, 'i do' ".
Or it can be when we, john and rachel, get married etc.. It took me a minute to figure out what was said without the commas. Other than that, really cool design!

What are you inviting people to? It doesn't say anything about a wedding. No date, no time, no address, nothing about marriage or a wedding. I also think the Pic Collage logo in the corner is a little tacky.

It doesn't give any info and it just says "..and forever begins when we" it just ends without finishing...I would reconsider..I'm down with the creepy aspect but its an unfinished invite that should be reworked.

I agree with everything PP's have said. Also, you might consider changing the coloring, as it is hard to read. The letters blend in with the background.

Uhm what theme do you want for your wedding? Spooky? Halloween?

I think it looks more like a flyer than a wedding invite. The background is kind of blurry and the invite doesn't give much information about the wedding, just your names. Also the sentence isn't complete

Have you tried paperless post or something similar?

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I agree with this, it is missing the ending of the quote. I think you should also have the location, time etc. Cool design though. Is your wedding on Halloween or halloween themed?